thank you everyone for the crticism, its really helping me fix problems
edge67 wrote:
The only things that caught my eye here that looked out of place was the bit of yellowing at the bottom of Aragorn's coat. It looks a bit more like mud at the bottom of the coat rather than OSL and I am not sure you need to convey the light falling on this part of the coat. I'm thinking maybe just a brighter green where you think the light is falling rather than the yellowish tinge. It's a minor point though! There also seems to be a bit of yellow on the leading edge of the coat underneath his forearm (the one carrying the torch) - this caught my eye too.
Minor quibbles on a brilliant paint job! Great work on his face too.
Thanks for the constructive criticism (
) Edge. I think you are right abot the first point - I'll fix that up in the next update. I quite like the other patch near his forearm though so I think I'll keep that
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IsleStaggerholm wrote:
I think he looks great, but the right side of his face away from the torch needs to be heavily shadowed.
Thanks mate! I am yet to do the shadows so thanks for the advice
garmenhord wrote:
nice, looking better then previous time, if i remember well!
thanks Garmy!
ukfreddybear wrote:
You have done a good job with the actual fire colouring, although there is in reality very little red in flame. More of a deep orange. I also see what you are trying to do with the black. You are attempting to simulate the fire gases resulting from the flames burning of the fuel. It almost works, but again, would be more realistic if it was a dark grey rather than jet black.
thanks dave
. I'll try and fix the flame with some grey and orange then