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Author:  TheEverPilgrim [ Wed Mar 17, 2010 4:27 am ]
Post subject:  Hey, just catching up to you.

Skinny...

I'm sorry, I didn't follow your WIP for this last month. But, I think in general it might be overall too bright... I really like the "skin" tone you accomplished though, and the eyes are really good.... it's the rusty mail, plate armor and the cloak... I think they are all quite a bit brighter then they could be. Do you have washes? Did you think of trying them? I was even thinking the blue wash for the armor... if not just go to the straight badab black... also badab on the mail would be good. I think if the old, worn, and tattered outerwear was duller, it would make the skin tone you chose even look better.

I know, I'm not one with tonnes of experience and the competition is over, but thought you might still like a bit of feedback.

Cheers.

Author:  samoht [ Wed Mar 17, 2010 8:17 am ]
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Why does he have blue armour?

Looking pretty good though. 8)

Author:  theOneRider [ Wed Mar 17, 2010 6:02 pm ]
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I like it. I think the blue-green armor helps give him a more ghostly look. :yay:
I do wonder about the stuff you're using for mist, though. I don't want to be mean, but it just looks too plasticy to me. You might try cotton balls, next time you do one of these buggers. If I can get a camera setup to work, I'll show you what I mean.

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