Elegost:
For starters, I would knock his base point value down a bit. Compare him with Legolas - very similar stats but without the amazing special rule. Maybe 80 or so.
Being a ranger, and since he never really wears any especially heavy armor in the game, I don't really think Elegost should have the option for heavy armor (however, that's not to say it's unbalanced, just not thematic in my opinion).
Also, I would simply strike the "Cracked Elfstone Accuracy Enhancement" off of his wargear list altogether. As you have him written, +2 to his Shoot value will give him a shoot value of 1+. Since there aren't any negative modifiers, only in-the-way rolls, this means that (along with the Rivendell Brooch) he could be getting 3 automatic hits per turn. Personally, I would also drop the Brooch to 2 shots per turn rather than 3 (since, even though he's definitely a skilled archer, I don't think he would come close to Legolas's skill).
Idrial:
Both of your new spells have a second conditional roll - personally I would do away with that and just increase the difficulty of the spell by 1. So for instance, make loudwater fury difficulty 5+ instead of difficulty 4+ and then having to roll a 3+.
Loudwater Fury seems a tad too good. Since the primary target is taking a whopping 3 hits, I would drop the strength of those hits to just 4. I would also have other models within 3" suffer just 1 strength 3 hit, instead of 2.
For Aura of the Valar, instead of the 5+ difficulty and then a second roll of 2+ to make the spell work, I would just make it a special rule (rather than a spell) and say something like "When Idrial loses her last wound, and it is not saved by Fate, she may sacrifice any combination of 3 points of Might, Will, or Fate to ignore the wound. She may not use her free Will for this purpose, if she is wearing an Elven ring.
Just my 0.02, hope it helps!
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